About My Family

     
Please correct my answer for 5 questions of speaking test.

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Question 1 : Tell me about your family ?Answer : Well first of all , the main thing you need khổng lồ know is that I come from a small family with four members.They are my parents , my elder brother và me.My father is a supervisor in toàn quốc air catering company at the rã Son Nhat airport.As for my mother , My mom is a housewife.In addition to,she also has small grocery store.At last , my brother is a computer programmer và was born three years before me.On vị trí cao nhất of that I can also địa chỉ cửa hàng that we often gather together lớn have a happy meal , talk , discuss about our work, our current life and future plan.In fact , my small family always make me feel relax và comfortable in the moment.Something else that I need to comment on is that my family is a very happy one.So actually , we love each other và expect khổng lồ live together under the same roof forever. <..>
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I noticed that the beginning of every answer seems annoyitng if these answers all are answered at the same time. It's just repeating the beginning again & again. If these questions are not going khổng lồ be answered at the same time. Then i think the beginning sentence is okay :)
Thank you for your advice..^_^..Yep , I can change the beginning of every answer. But I concern the ideas in this essay.Can you give me some advice about ideas of essay ?
FrankZheng
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Dec 18, 2013 #4
I hope that these suggestions can help you.
Question 1 : Tell me about your family ?Answer : Well, first of all , the main thing you need lớn know is that I come from a small family with four members.They are , my parents , my elder brother & me. My father is a supervisor in nước ta air catering company at the rã Son Nhat airport. As for & my mother , My mom she is a housewife.In addition to lớn ,she also run a small grocery store.At last , my brother is a computer programmer and was born three years before older than me.On đứng top of that I can also showroom that we often gather together khổng lồ have a happy meal , talk , discussion about our work, our current life và future plans .In fact , my small family always make me feel relaxed và comfortable inat the moment.Something else that I need to bình luận on is thatAlso, my family is a very happy one.So actually ,because we love each other & expect towill live together under the same roof forever. By the way ,I don't think your ideas is interesting. Vày you believe that you will live in one house forever?Question 2 : Tell me about your house ?Answer : Well first of all , the main thing you need khổng lồ know is that My house is in a noisy areadistrictnot far fromneara large main road in District twelve .On vị trí cao nhất of that I can also địa chỉ that it is little small & made of bricks.There are three rooms in my house: they are the living room,the bedroom and the kitchen.Something else that I need to comment on is that All the rooms are nice & tidy.So actually, and the interior decoration & the furniture in my house are beautifull although they aren't expensive.Question 3 : tell me about your hometown or your city?Answer : I was born in Ha nam giới province , but I have grown up in sài gòn city.So it can be said thatI am more comfortable lớn say that sài gòn city is my hometown.I suppose if I had to describe tp hcm city , the main thing you need to know is that It's a enormous city , maybe evenactually one of the biggest cities in Southeast Asia I guess.It's big và has many back alleys in fact that even the locals problems finding their way around.On the top of that I can also add that my thành phố offers examples of both classical & contemporary architecture.Actually some of the Vietnam 's most renowned landmarks are "slap-bang" in the middle of hồ chí minh city.Question 4 : Tell me about your studyAnswer :Well first of all , the main thing you need to know is that I'm a student of the AFTC training center.At this center I study nine disciplines aboutin financial fields such as quantitative, financial reporting analysis, economic, corporate finance and so on .Besides studying at the AFTC training center , I'm attending Learning English course at small English center.On top of that I can also add that I'm always on the go.In fact , I have to lớn get lớn the bottom of problems related khổng lồ revise schoolwork and become skilled in English.Question 5 : What makes you happy?Well first of all , the main thing you need to lớn know is thatAThe feeling of pleasure or enjoyment makes me happy. In fact that, most of my family's free time is spent inon talkint to each other about our current life, current work & future plans. That was one of the happiest moments of my life.On top of that I can also showroom that it is necessary to vì chưng useful sth for my life in order to have true happiness. So actually, when I get a sense of achievement from my work, those everyday actions give me more effort ? , more inspiration & more happiness.

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Pahan
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Well, I find the first sentence is not adding any value lớn this response. Pleasure and enjoyment always giảm giá with happiness và this whole idea is not giving any meaningful thought to lớn the reader. I strongly suggest you lớn remove this sentence from this paragraph.In fact that, most of my family's không tính phí time is spent in talking withto each other about our current life, current work & future planssharing our experiences, thoughts, and future plans.
...Rather than saying this, it's better you tell them about your feelings và experiences when you have family moments together. That's a better way to lớn have the reader impressed.

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